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Helen Keller and Thanks to Dad


“Helen Keller” by Chloe

In order for Helen Keller to communicate with other people she has to learn sign language. But, since she was blind other people had to put their hands in hers so she could feel the letters and from that, know what they were spelling.
Helen learned how to speak sign language from the help of Anne Sullivan. She taught Helen and never gave up trying to teach her new words. The first word Helen learned and understood was ‘water.’ And yes, Helen did learn to speak words that actually came from her mouth.
I had to try very hard to learn to ride a bicycle. First, I had to learn to ride a tricycle, obviously. My teacher was a pretty good one because I learned at four years of age. Possibly three, I don’t know because I really don’t remember. Usually, my dad would hold on to my shoulders while I pedaled around the sidewalk. Soon I was ready to ride a bicycle. And in fact, only a few days ago I got a new bicycle and with that one you couldn’t use pedals as brakes. It even has a speed dial. And it’s all thanks to dad.
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P.S. The photo was taken by Sophie.

Giant’s Realm

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Giant’s Realm by Chloe (inspired by the painting, “Giant” by N.C. Wyeth)

I was at the beach with my five other siblings. We were playing in the sand, since the ocean’s waves were going beserk. Then suddenly, out of nowhere, a big gust of wind came, blowing my hat off.

Well, after that everything seemed to happen at once. The wind was billowing, the clouds were swirling and churning and the kids were screaming. The youngest, Alex, was crying. When I opened my eyes (I didn’t even know they were closed), in the waves, which were churning and thrashing, was a giant. A humongous giant, like even more than humongous should be.

It seemed taller than the sky and had clouds swirling around it. In fact, now that I think about it, the giant itself seemed to be made of clouds. By then, all heck had broken loose between the kids. They didn’t care the wind was pulling them toward the giant or the fact that the giant had a club, big enough to squash a house. I tried to warn them, but they wouldn’t come. They were getting pulled closer and closer and closer to the giant. I tried to run to get to them. It was as if I was being pushed back and they were being pulled forward. Finally, they were sucked up into this vortex-like thing. I was exhausted from trying to fight the force. I managed to mutter “Help!” before I blacked out.

I found myself in a cave or something kind of like a cave except much nicer. They shaped the moss into pictures, which I thought was a good idea for decorating but at the moment I guess that’s not what I should be focused on right now. I wanted to get out of the cave but before I did that I thought about what happened but that seemed to be too much to do at the moment and I fell back asleep.

When I woke up next I first noticed a big bruise on my arm and below that there was a big gash in my arm, which freaked me out. But it seemed to be mending by itself. As if it had some sore of magic medicine. Before I had time to contemplate that, someone came into the room. I didn’t recognize him or her. I couldn’t see the face, but it wasn’t big enough to be a giant. Finally, whoever it was came into the light. It was a he – no she – no he. It was weird when I saw him.

At first, he looked like my dad. In fact, he looked exactly like my dad. The blond hair, the crinkles around his eyes as if he smiles a lot, and the tiny scar on his forehead you could barely see. I wanted to jump out of bed and hug him, but then he changed and formed into what looked like my mom and again it was an exact match. Then he (or she – I still couldn’t tell) formed into my brother then my sister.

I decided to ask him who he was and for that matter what he (or she) was. So I spoke up and managed to say this much: “Who are you?” “Well, I’m want, desire and comfort,” replied the stranger. “What?” I yelled. “Well,” he said again, this time with an air of mystery, “it’s quite confusing, I know.” “What do YOU mean?” I shouted with anger boiling inside of me. I didn’t want riddles. I wanted ANSWERS. Everything seemed to be going wrong. Everything, I was thinking miserably. As if reading my mind, the “whatever-it-was” said, “I know what you’re thinking.” “Oh! Do you?” I burst out. “What I mean is, I’m what you desire.” “That was what you just said before and if you’re thinking it makes more sense now than it did before, it doesn’t!”

I was getting more and more confused by the second. Then he glanced over at me and as though reading my thoughts again, he said, “Let me explain.” “Finally,” I muttered and waited for him to continue with a forced patience. Then he started again, this time a little more confidently. “People only come to this place when they feel desperate and need comfort.” He paused, glancing at me. I nodded, which seemed to encourage him to go on. He continued, saying, “When you said ‘help’ I received your plea. You were in despair, so I brought you here to my island. You needed comfort also. So say if you were in need of some fun, I might look like your favorite game. Or if you were hungry I might look like a burger.” I laughted. “But in your case the thing you desired most and comforted you most was…” His face turned into my dad’s. “Me,” he said. His face turned into my mom’s. “Me,” she said. Then all of my siblings and they also said, “Me.” Then the “whatever-it-was” said I wanted…family.

So, now I understood why he looked like everybody in my family. But what about my brothers and sisters? Or my mom and dad. They must be worried sick. I wonder how long I’ve been gone. I decided to ask all those questions because I was sick and tired of waiting. “Where are my brothers and sisters?” I demanded. “In the giant’s realm,” he replied. “In the giant’s realm?” I screamed out hysterically. I decided I should get all my other questions answered first and then come back to this subject.

The “whatever-it-was” seemed mildly surprised that I didn’t ask more on the subject. But, that didn’t stop me from asking my next question. “How long have I been here?” I asked. He replied, “five days, but…” “Five days!” I shouted, horrified. “Let me finish,” said the stranger and he started over, this time without my interrupting. He said, “You’ve been gone five days but in your time five days would be considered one day.”

I doubted my mom and dad were any less worried, but still it could be worse. It could be actually longer in my time. Well, now I have to go back to the subject of where my brothers and sisters were. So I did and asked, “About my siblings being in the giant realm…can you help me with that situation?” He replied, “Not exactly.” I can give you a map to show you where it is, but that is all.” “I cannot accompany you on the trip, though.” Then added, “So, do you want to rescue your brothers and sisters?” “YES!” I said with force.

“Well, then,” he said, “I shall give you a map of where to go. Also, I have a surprise for you.” He said all of that enthusiastically. He took me outside…and it was the most…ugly thing I had ever seen. It was the most polluted place I had ever seen. It had trash, it had bird droppings all over, and it had jaggedly edged rocks. It was the most horrible place I had ever seen. Then a thought occurred to me. I questioned, “What’s the name of this island?” The “whatever-it-was” replied, “Bemeda.” The name sounded familiar, but I couldn’t tell what it was. Then I asked, “Where is this place located?” “In the Atlantic Ocean. It gets the most shipwrecks because nobody can see it until they are too close.”

Then it hit me, “This is the Bermuda Triangle,” I said. He nodded. “But then why do my people call it ‘Bermuda’ and you call it ‘Bemeda?” I asked curiously. “Because that’s the closest they could get to the real name. Then I remembered. “So what’s the surprise?” He pointed to the elevator. I hadn’t even noticed it was there. But by then I figured not to question things. “Good-bye,” said the “whatever-it-was.” “The instructions are inside.” Then he disappeared. Now I was alone. I went into the elevator, but instead of numbers it had letters. Which I thought was quite unusual. I didn’t really know what to do so I turned around. There was a bench with a seatbelt attached (I really wasn’t so sure about this elevator) and a poster with instructions.

It read:
1. Type in destination.
2. Sit on bench and put on seatbelt within 30 seconds or you’re doomed.
3. Try to enjoy the ride.

Well now I really wasn’t sure if I wanted to do this. “Or you’re doomed.” Seriously? But it was for the sake of my brothers and sisters. So I typed in “Giant’s Realm” and then I pressed enter.

The loudspeaker started counting down from 30 and by the time it reached 15 I was done. Then it reached one. And it lurched forward, then to the side, then up and then…down, just like a rollercoaster except it was like a gazillion miles an hour. Also the ups and downs were more extreme. It zigzagged and my stomach flipped. Then it got a little hilly so we went a little up, then a little down, then a little up and then it happened all over again. On the bright side, it didn’t do any loop-the-loops. Finally, it was over and I got off. I’ve been to the most extreme rollercoasters at “Six Flags.” But this definitely beat all of them put together.

I didn’t know what’s worse, this or the island, Bemeda. I was so busy in my thought that I didn’t notice my surroundings and that was a problem. I finally looked around me and I saw giants, hundreds of giants just sleeping on the ground. I noticed all their noses were huge and lumpy. You could see the nostrils. I was really wondering why evolution would do that.

I searched for my siblings, Jane, Zack, Alex, Nicholas and Joan. Then I spotted them. Near a giant. In fact, it was the biggest giant. I rushed over to them and made the quiet sign. I whispered to them to just follow me. And they did. We reached the elevator. It seemed to have grown bigger and gotten more benches. I told them all to put on seatbelts and to sit down (Alex needed help with his).

Then I typed, “Home sweet home.”

The Meeting, Part IV

The last and final installment of Chloe’s story.

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The next day, I set off to do some pick-pocketing for the team. I spotted a lady who had just put a $2 bill in her pocket! A $2 bill! I couldn’t wait to steal it, so I walked behind her and my hand moved inch-by-inch toward her pocket and eventually I took it. She didn’t seem to have noticed, also I think she might’ve had more $2 bills at home because she didn’t seem psyched to have it when she came out of the store because I knew this $2 bill could be worth a lot if I sold it. Even more for people who really wanted it. So I decided to keep this a secret from the rest of the club until I got some money for this.
I went to the candy store, paid for one pack of M&Ms and took two others without paying. Then I left the store, went home and got ready for the next meeting. I also put the $2 away. I got there just in time and went into the alleyway of Maddiso Ave. No one was there so I waited a couple of minutes and still nobody came for the meeting. So I figured today was one of the days where it was a bad idea to be here.
The leader John said that when they weren’t there to meet them in the alleyway of Club Road. And they were there, just as they should be. And we all pooled in our money again. I had a total of $7 and two packs of M&Ms, a juice box, a box of tic-tacs and I got $7.22. John discussed tricks to pick-pocketing which were actually quite useful.
I went home and on my way I saw a man stick $10 in his pocket. I did the same thing I did with the woman and got it. The guy was about to go into a crafts store and was about to take out his $10. “Oh no!” I thought. But he was already looking toward me. He must have noticed me behind him and called me over. This might sound kind of weird, but Rule #1 of my club is to always fess up if you’re caught. Mostly because we’ve seen what’s happened to other people when they’re caught.
So I gave back his $10. He didn’t call the cops although he did ask for an extra $5 because it was the fact that I decided to steal in the first place. This was the most embarrassing thing that ever happened to me. Ever. Even more embarrassing than when I got a 62% on my science test and everybody saw that I got that grade. I ate my M&Ms miserably on my way home. I put away what was left of what I got from the meeting in my secret compartment. Then I saw something in it that got me extremely excited. “The $2 bill!” I thought.

The Meeting, Part III

Welcome back, loyal readers. In today’s episode our protagonist wakes up way too early and finds a solution to his brother’s monster-under-the-bed problem.
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I woke up in the morning at 5:45 am because my little brother, Tommy, had given me a wet willy. It’s this thing when you stick your finger in your mouth then stick it in someone’s ear. He was staring down at me through wide eyes. “What?!” I demanded, very annoyed. Tommy said, “I have a question.” “Oh, really!” I said sarcastically since I knew it was going to be one of his pointless questions, which it was. Because he said, “Can you check if there’s a monster under my bed?”

Well, I was sick and tired of him getting scared of monsters. So I went to his room and checked in the closet and under the bed. I told him there were no monsters in his room. Then, an idea struck me. “Tommy, I’m going to get you a monster repellent spray!” Tommy clapped happily. “OK!” he shouted enthusiastically.
So that day I ended up spending $6 on a Fabreze Fresh spray. So I went home and told Tommy it was “monster repellent.” He told me to spray it all around his room every night before bed and I did. For about a week, but then he started to complain that he didn’t like the smell. So then I really didn’t know what to do but I thought that I could just change it with water and I did just that.

The Meeting, Part II

When we last encountered the junior pickpocket, he was on his way home with his weekly haul…
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When I got home, I didn’t mention anything to mom, dad or Tommy (my little brother). And I hid what I got under the loose floorboard in the corner of my bedroom, where I hid the rest of my secret stash: $37 and a few other nicknacks. I decided to take a nap since I was rather tired, and I got three hours of sleep ’till mom screamed menacingly that if I didn’t come down that instant I wouldn’t get to eat at all. I figured I must’ve made her call my name 10 times.

So I went downstairs and grumpily sat down and started eating. Finally, when it was time to go to bed, I wasn’t even tired anymore. But I made the bed plump and cozy and I dozed off right away.

The Meeting, Part I


Chloe has started to write a short story for her creative writing class. I will be serializing her work over the next few days, just like Dickens used to do with his novels. This new story, entitled “The Meeting,” draws its inspiration from a eponymous painting depicting a group of boys huddled together.

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I was at another one of the meetings. They were talking about many things: pick-pocketing and other small sneaky schemes. I have to admit it was kind of fun. Having secret meetings in the alleyways and pooling out what we managed to scrape together over the week.

Today I had managed to steal $6.25 and two packs of Skittles. We laid out what we got on a cardboard box. In all, we got $22, 5 pennies, the two Skittle packs, gummy bears and a pack of pencils. We then divvied everything equally and gave anything extra to John, the leader. None of us minded that he got the extra stuff, especially since he contributed the most to what we got at the end of the week.

I got $5.50, 15 Skittles and two pencils. Not bad, I was thinking as I ate the Skittles on my way home.

Chloe Writes and Writes


Chloe had her first gifted and talented creative writing class at the local university this morning and it was a resounding success. She loves her instructor, who reminds her of her second grade teacher. There are five other children in the group and they all encouraged each other as they read their oeuvres out loud. Chloe has the class over the next eight weeks, and I plan to reserve the Saturday blog entry for her creations.

The kids’ first assignment was to pick two common objects and write a story or poem about each of them in five minutes. Here are the fruits of her labor.

Clocks
Clock, clock the time is a shock.
I wanted to be early but that is now out of the question.
So there is only one suggestion.
Which is to run, run as fast as light travels from the sun.
So I ran all the way and made it by the end of the day.
I went through the gate, but I was still late.
Shoes
Shoes, shoes it rhymes with blues.
I know it has nothing to do with it,
or perhaps just a little bit.
Now I stop just to think of what to write next.
I hope the teacher will say “time is up”
because I can’t think of anything that rhymes with next.
She also has to write creative journal entries every day. Here’s her first one:
Dreams
In dreams it seems everything is real.
Nothing is hidden by a dark encased veil.
You see odd things, some cause great scare.
You might think it is unfair.
It is not your fault and it is not your friend’s.
The only problem is you can’t put it to an end.

Sophie’s Princess Story


Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess named Belle and she was mom’s favorite princess. But then a witch gave her poisonous apple and then she fell down and then a prince kissed her. The witch came back and turned the prince into a frog. The princess kissed the frog and then the prince turned back into a prince.

All the time the witch came back to the prince and she said, “Ha! Ha! Ha!” The witch turned the prince back into a dragon. The princess hugged the dragon and got itched. The prince hurt the witch and then the witch went far, far away and turned into a toad. But then she turned into a witch again. She went to a different princess story. Belle and the prince kissed. And they danced together.

In Sophie’s Words

I be funny.  I shake my booty.  I go to Grammy’s.  I play with Mommy and Daddy.  I like to bug people.  I like to swim in Grammy’s apartment.  I have with everyone.  Shirley and Bone-Bone and everything are my favorite stuffed animals.

I like to burp.  I like to prout (that’s French for fart).  I be very fun.  I like Mommy’s glasses since they have purple on them.  I like to be a cat.  I like to do somersaults and swinging and the balance beam.

I like to play with my friends.  I like princess movies.  I like to have straight hair. I like to wear dresses.  I like pink.  My favorite game is Dora on the Wii.

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That’s the extent of my first interview with Sophie.  4-year olds are great.